Once upon a time there was a wonderful family that went to the hotel for
a holiday and how to play golf.
Then there was a strange funny sound in the living room it sound like
there were a thousands of bees.
There were a thousands of bees that were buzzing really loud like a elephant
they were about to sting them.
So the family ran as fast as they could to run away from the bees
so they ran into the car so they could go back home but the doors
were lock.So the family ran back home.So they decide to not go
back to the hotel ever again because they were annoying and loud like a
elephant.
By Sydney
Goodness Sydney! I'm not sure I'd like to be around so many bees! This is a super story. Perhaps you could think of a different way to start your sentences other than 'so'. Hope to see you again on 100WC
ReplyDeletehi Sydney - well done - you have used lots of description and a bit of drama. The hotel doesn't sound very good at all! Caroline Team 100WC
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